Kia ora Cooper, My name is Poitirere I am a year 7 student attending St Pius X school, I really like how you did your metaphors,It is lovely but I think that if you organised your writing it would make a lot more sense.
Hi Cooper, these metaphors are amazing, I also like how you organised it. I think that you need to work on your spelling and you need to make sense. Keep up the good work. :)
Well Done Cooper !
ReplyDeleteWell Done Cooper !
ReplyDeleteHI my name is Lukas Nice Work!!!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Cooper,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Poitirere I am a year 7 student attending St Pius X school,
I really like how you did your metaphors,It is lovely but I think that if you organised your writing it would make a lot more sense.
Yours sincerely: Poitirere/Lili
Hi Cooper,
ReplyDeletethese metaphors are amazing, I also like how you organised it. I think that you need to work on your spelling and you need to make sense. Keep up the good work. :)