Thursday 14 March 2019

poem


4 comments:

  1. Talofa Lava Cooper,
    My name is Dianne and I am a year 7 student at St Pius School, I really love all of the things that you have named that is blue. Can you please describe those things that are blue?

    If you did pink? Then what would be the things that are pink?

    Keep up the great work!
    Dianne

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  2. Hey Cooper, I am a year 8 attending Saint Pius X Catholic School. I like how you describe the things that are blue, I think you should use a simile for the things that are blue.

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  3. Hi Cooper ,
    I really like how you describe colours of different objects.

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  4. Hi Cooper - I love your BLUE poem !

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Thank-you for your positive, helpful, thoughtful comments.